#20 - I really like the concept. If you can make it less cursive and more bold that is what we are looking for. Our logo is for our website, marketing material, etc but we want it to stand out on our listing signs which people are driving by so it's usually hard to read.
in the design #20 i have used that font because of the stylistic sliders you have set on the brief...i don't understand if you want elegant font or not..in the #24 i have tried with the font i like..we can try more bold but we can't force the proportions of the design based on the thinness of the symbol on the text