I really like the sense of success and victory that entry 23 gives me. I would like to see a different font and I have to have some red in the design. Possibly the flame in the chest can be placed in the rt hand and in red and could we try another type of star and color to purple and with the trail maybe going around the back of the head. Also I would like to see the letter lines offset/staggered and the word "fire" in the 3rd line red. Entry 21 sticks with me but I dont know why by that I mean that there seems to be something there that portrays what I am looking for which is professional, focused direction, value and passion. Again would like to see a different font. Entry 22 is also staying with me but there is too much going on and I like red and purple. Would like to see if you can modify this some more striving for the above ideals and sense I am trying to portray.