ENTRY 9 I LIKE THE BOLDNESS OF THIS DESIGN. I LIKE THE TAGLINE BEING ITALICIZED BUT WOULD LIKE TO SEE THE BLACK BACKGROUND CHANGED AND WOULD ALSO LIKE TO SEE A DIFFERENT EMBLEM/LOGO DESIGN. AGAIN THE BOLDNESS IS THERE BUT I NEED TO SEE SOME PASSION, AND WOULD LIKE THE OVERALL DESIGN TO REFLECT "FOCUSED DIRECTION" AS WELL. NICE WORK THOUGH. LOOK FORWARD TO SEEING MORE ADDITIONAL DESIGNS AS WELL