Entry 49 is great - it can be a winner. Try keeping the pentagon shape, but try connecting the logos with other types of connectors (something thinner?) Right now the thick "squares" are the connectors, lets see if we can make it more "aiir" like
Hi, thanks for your feedback, here are some revisions for you, i hope this is what you mean. Can you explain what "aiir" refer to? or maybe its just a misspelling.