Thanks for your submission. I believe this is way too complicated and takes up too much room. The logo we use will be used for signage on our store fronts and sometimes you have to fit the sign in a tight space.
Thanks for the effort. I like this one much better. However, would like the blue to be darker. I like the following capitalization best Cash Today PAWN. And maybe use yellow for the tag line. Also, typically I like to see the word PAWN a little larger than Cash Today.