A hint of the Orient. Not to offend, but I'm not feeling it. It's hard to sense the C's creating the S. I see an S inside an S. I like your direction, 3D ribbon is a nice creative touch. I doubt shadows in the wraps would improve it. Thanks for this effort.
what I'm starting to see more and more is when I see the "S," I see a swastika. Bummer. Can you find a way to prevent that association, yet still make the audience see the "S?" Thanks, K
with this one, make company name font consistent, even though the words won't stack well. LLC smaller font as you have it now. But, maintain the white space between top and bottom of logo continue into the area where the company name is. this will darken the font of COLLISIONS SCIENCE.
Reconsidering, I see S but not see. Can the logo be made less sharp and more rounded? Perhaps apposing corner, upper right and lower left? Add flare beyond the geometric balance
ok, here, rotate the logo 45deg. The reason is, because the crash test target is a circle with horizontal and vertical lines dividing the circle into 4 quadrants. and opposing quadrants are black, the other two yellow. the C and S quadrants might look good and resemble this common target.
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I see the box which is nice, but I'm not feeling it with this one.
Excellent use of font, thanks.
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too bag cars don't fold up like this in crashes! We'd be set.
font is preferred. Thanks.
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YES!
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