Hi Ashley,
Thank you for making an entry in my logo contest.
-like the palm and how the name fit's in. Would like to see a different font maybe a smaller size as well. I do like the wavy blue that runs throught the characters alot so I wouldn't change that. The "of maui" is a nice font as well although maybe a darker green?
-Not sure if you do graphic art much, but a nice sunset background could be nice.
- off the top of my head ... bringing water into the foreground and reflecting the Cary's of maui?
-Would be great to have an ukulele or person playing music in the scene somewhere. Check out hawaiimusicsupply.com. Just a little guy in the corner playing an instrument get's the music store idea across.
Anyway, great start on the logo and I hope you have time for a revision.
Thanks Again!
aloha,
Cary