#2 I like the idea of the trumpets but wondered if they can be incorporated more into the words. I'm not a fan of the font for the word Carmel. Perhaps something thicker and less scroll-like. I also like the stars but wonder if it might be too much with both the stars and the trumpets. Perhaps a separate logo mark with just the stars. Thank you!
#3 and #4 I'd like to see a stronger font for these. Not a fan of these fonts but like the concept. Possible to make some other font versions of these?
ok I tried heavier fonts and I tried the mountain coming out of the A - I really didn't like any of what I did ... maybe someone else can find a way to make it look good... or I may have an inspiration later....