Great news, I am happy you like those new versions.
I can try some new fonts, it would help me though if I know your preferences about:
a) Serif or Sanserif fonts, and
b) text in lowercase or uppercase letters
Thanks!
Love it. The characters are perfect wouldn't change a thing. We talked about it and we'd love some more font options here. I don't know exactly what we are looking for in a font but maybe you can throw some out and we can zero in. Awesome job.
Hi!
I corrected the face of the right guy, #53.
In #54 I've isolated him in order to check his expression.
Let me know if you like the new draft.
Thanks
So I've adjusted the features on both characters.
I think that now the guy on the right looks closer to the real one.
The red cigarette cherry was a nice idea!
What do you think about the new version?
awesome color on the tie. could also mirror the red accent on the cigarette cherry.
i was actually a fan of the old smoke. kinda matched the rest of the style better in my opinion.
i really appreciate your revisions here. i have just a few more things that i think could be improved.
guy on the left: the beard kind of looks like it is in dread locks. maybe you could fill it in a bit so it looks fuller? Also the shading under the nose looks a bit like a nosebleed. maybe we can clean that up too?
guy on the right: i still feel like we're not totally capturing his likeness - it might be the nose / shading on the nose. i'm not positive but i'm not totally seeing him when i look at that picture.
all in all this looks fantastic. maybe we can keep zeroing it in. thanks so much.
Thanks for the comment!
Unfortunately due to low resolution preview you can't have a clear impression of my work.
I'll adjust the glasses as you mentioned and try some different fonts as well
but...
if you think that this sketching style doesn't have much future in your contest let me know and I'll try a different approach.
Thanks!
Hi pink. It looks good. I love the detail! This is my favorite of the two. Couple of notes, the glasses and the eyes look a little unbalanced on the character on the right. Also te shading elements are great but kind of lack the crispness were looking for in the logo. I’d also love to see some different fonts and texts to go along with the characters. Thanks so much for the submission!
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I picked some serif fonts with different styles, from classic to more bold and modern.
Let me know which style you prefer.
Thanks!
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I can try some new fonts, it would help me though if I know your preferences about:
a) Serif or Sanserif fonts, and
b) text in lowercase or uppercase letters
Thanks!
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I corrected the face of the right guy, #53.
In #54 I've isolated him in order to check his expression.
Let me know if you like the new draft.
Thanks
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Right guy is still throwing me a bit. Looks like he has a bit of a fat cheek. Can we try another round on him?
Thanks so much!
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I think that now the guy on the right looks closer to the real one.
The red cigarette cherry was a nice idea!
What do you think about the new version?
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i was actually a fan of the old smoke. kinda matched the rest of the style better in my opinion.
i really appreciate your revisions here. i have just a few more things that i think could be improved.
guy on the left: the beard kind of looks like it is in dread locks. maybe you could fill it in a bit so it looks fuller? Also the shading under the nose looks a bit like a nosebleed. maybe we can clean that up too?
guy on the right: i still feel like we're not totally capturing his likeness - it might be the nose / shading on the nose. i'm not positive but i'm not totally seeing him when i look at that picture.
all in all this looks fantastic. maybe we can keep zeroing it in. thanks so much.
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Unfortunately due to low resolution preview you can't have a clear impression of my work.
I'll adjust the glasses as you mentioned and try some different fonts as well
but...
if you think that this sketching style doesn't have much future in your contest let me know and I'll try a different approach.
Thanks!
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Here are my designs #23, #24.
What do you think?
Thanks!
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