Here is my take - I've been semi adventurous with the fonts - let me know whether you prefer to push it even further, or actually if you'd rein it in a bit.
#99 I like the blue intervention font, and the flying look is great. Not crazy about the font used for "career". A little too old school, i think. While I think connecting them at the "e" is a brilliant idea, it may look a little awkward. You can try with a different font, or maybe see if there is something to do with both words flying.
Perhaps it works better like this - a bit more solid, and reduced angle ... I'll give it some thought and come back to you with something new tomorrow.
Another idea is for them to be flying as if they were going to cross paths and make a V. but the V would obviously not be upright. The r and the n would almost be connecting.