Cardinal Settlements, LLCLogo Design Contest

Hi sir,
have you found an interesting logo for you to look for in some logo submissions from me?
give me feedback so I can correct existing design concepts and create another logo,
I'd love to help you find what you're looking for,
thank you very much

Best regards,
Thania

Hi sir?
have you found an interesting logo for you to look for in some logo submissions from me?
you've been away some time for this contest you created,
thank you very much

Hi sir,
Have you seen and checked some of my latest logos?
#279, #274, #273, #272, #252, #251, #250, #249,
and do you need revisions between them all?
if you need that, please tell me,
thank you very much,

Are you able to revise the logo to make it look more like a cardinal and not a hawk?