This is getting closer and closer. Can you make the feather come out of an "I" so that it is super easy to know that the feather is supposed to be the "i" in "cardinal"?
I think this is still communicating two different words: "CARD" & "NAL". We like this design but we need that feather to look like an "I" in "CARDINAL".
We liked the two colors in the logo - we would like that to come back. We just don't think that the feather communicates an "I" like it should. Can you make the feather come out of the base of an "I"? View the sample I submitted for a reference.
Okay, this is our favorite so far. Thanks for submitting the version without the slogan. Now that we've seen both designs, we actually like the slogan being in there. Can you please make the slogan the same red color as the background color behind "NAL". Also, can you make that feather come out of the top of an "I"? We are worried that people will think it says "CARD" - "NAL", but we need "CARDINAL" to read cleanly. Is there any way you can make that happen?
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Maybe this is more clear in CARDINAL reading.
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