this is getting closer, but still doesn't have the right look. i'm not sure i would want to take more of your time since it's been a few iterations already. thanks for your effort, I appreciate it.
Just a quick update to let you know that tomorrow and Sunday i will on a small trip, but i will probably be back again Monday or Sunday at the end of the night. Just saying this in case you reply and i don´t so you know.
Again if you need changes feel free to ask please.
this is closer, but a bit too simple, the nodes are too orderly on the top faces of the diamond, and there aren't enough nodes to make this look organic, looks like a basic circuit which loses the effect.
I think i made it : ) Being some hours around this, i really hope you like it. This version is really clean and for me it´s the best for sure. I´ve re-made it from the start.
But i will also submit one based on my other design.
Let me know if you can put me again 1st so i can be able to submit. You can re-rank again later.
jjbq, based on my partners feedback they still like this concept as a potential winner but the version you have given is not adequate. Assuming you are still willing to do some variations, we can have you try to submit a few for consideration, please ping us when you are ready to submit. Again, conceptually we are looking for a organic growing diamond, outline of diamond should be roughly complete but maybe in the final stages of development, the nodes should be fine enough so that you can see some resolution in the shape. we specifically don't like that the current version the outline of the diamond is drawn explicitly, all the nodes should be growing up in the same direction and ending to form the outline of the rough diamond shape, does that make sense?
Just a quick update, i just can´t do the revisions yet, because i´m at the design office working and i can´t do this here, but when i arrive home at night, 9pm more or less, i will start working on your logo, probably i will take some time on this or not, i´m not sure yet, because i want to revise carefully to archive the best, when ready i will submit for your appreciation. And sorry for the delay, i wish i could have more time.
hi jjbq, i've been waiting to see your other variants for this concept, i'm still very interested by i don't think we're there yet. let me know when you are able to show some revisions, thanks.
Thank you very much for the great feedback. I´m at work, here is morning, but when i arrive home at night i will have more time and i will work on revisions and submit them for your appreciation. This is my timezone btw: http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
your current version is okay, but the fact that the outline of the diamond is so clear it loses the organic nature. the concept i have is like tree growth, but the edges of the tree leaves naturally forms the shape of the diamond, it can be rough. in the above design, you have the diamond shape traced out by lines, and some extraneous leaves outside, not the same effect
Thanks for allowing me to submit my revisions. I had done them yesterday already. Only #144 one i´ve done today, btw in this designs almost all the leaves are made to follow the flow of the branches, i´ve just duplicated very few of them.
For design #128 i´ve refine/simplify it better:
Option 1 - #136 only 2 types of circles
Option 2 - #137 only 1 type of circles, i´ve also submited black & white + grey versions of this logo so you can check.
Let me know your thoughts about them please. Suggestions you may have are welcome.
Sorry for the delay i was around my desgins for some hours to give you the best one with the right feel. I think i got it.
I´ve also made something that will probably be interesting, please check entry #129. You can see a power button in it in the end as a "start". Hope you like my concepts.
I´ve take advantage of my lunch time at work and had time to revise one. But when i arrive home i will work on more variations and submit them for your appreciation do not worrie.
Let me know if you like more this last submissions. Andi i´m going in the right direction.
hi, these new sets of logos look to regular. i like the original logo since it looked like an organically developing semi randomised growth (circuity, perhaps make them into leaves shape instead stressing), but want it in the diamond shape instead of the bulb shape you have
Thank you very much for the great feedback. Please check revisions and some other fonts suggestions worked for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
hi, this general concept would be very interesting if the general shape is the diamond, with some blue/grey variation based on the two sides like the other designs. don't like the font of the innovations part
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If you need anything else feel confortable to ask as always.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
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Hope you´re fine.
Just a quick update to let you know that tomorrow and Sunday i will on a small trip, but i will probably be back again Monday or Sunday at the end of the night. Just saying this in case you reply and i don´t so you know.
Again if you need changes feel free to ask please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I´m glad you like it. Thanks again for the suggestions.
Please check revisions worked for your consideration and let me know what do you think of them.
I will probably sleep in few minutes, but i will be back again tomorrow. Again feel confortable to ask if you need changes please.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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I´ve submited my revisions for your consideration.
Hope you like them.
Again feel free to ask if you need more changes. I will be at work during the day, but when i arrive home i can work on more changes.
Feel free as always.
Thank you
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope your having a good day.
I think i made it : ) Being some hours around this, i really hope you like it. This version is really clean and for me it´s the best for sure. I´ve re-made it from the start.
But i will also submit one based on my other design.
Let me know if you can put me again 1st so i can be able to submit. You can re-rank again later.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Sure i will be glad to revise.
I´m at work now, but when i arrive home i will make revisions for you. Maybe in 4 or 5 hours i will be home.
Thanks for all the suggestions.
Anything else just let me know.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you very much again for the feedback.
Just a quick update, i just can´t do the revisions yet, because i´m at the design office working and i can´t do this here, but when i arrive home at night, 9pm more or less, i will start working on your logo, probably i will take some time on this or not, i´m not sure yet, because i want to revise carefully to archive the best, when ready i will submit for your appreciation. And sorry for the delay, i wish i could have more time.
Will leave bellow my timezone again so you can check
http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Feel confortable if you need anything more.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you very much for the great feedback. I´m at work, here is morning, but when i arrive home at night i will have more time and i will work on revisions and submit them for your appreciation. This is my timezone btw: http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Feel free to ask if you need anything else.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for allowing me to submit my revisions. I had done them yesterday already. Only #144 one i´ve done today, btw in this designs almost all the leaves are made to follow the flow of the branches, i´ve just duplicated very few of them.
For design #128 i´ve refine/simplify it better:
Option 1 - #136 only 2 types of circles
Option 2 - #137 only 1 type of circles, i´ve also submited black & white + grey versions of this logo so you can check.
Let me know your thoughts about them please. Suggestions you may have are welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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In this selection phase only 1st ranked designer can submit revisions that´s why i couldn´t revise my designs.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Just to let you know that i will sleep now. But i will be back again tomorrow and i can work on changes if needed. Again feel free to ask as always.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Sorry for the delay i was around my desgins for some hours to give you the best one with the right feel. I think i got it.
I´ve also made something that will probably be interesting, please check entry #129. You can see a power button in it in the end as a "start". Hope you like my concepts.
Again feel confortable to ask if you need changes. Btw i will leave you my timezone bellow:
http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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As soon i arrive home i will work on revisions and submit for your appreciation.
Thank you.
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João
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Thanks you very much for your feedback.
I´ve take advantage of my lunch time at work and had time to revise one. But when i arrive home i will work on more variations and submit them for your appreciation do not worrie.
Let me know if you like more this last submissions. Andi i´m going in the right direction.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thank you very much for the great feedback. Please check revisions and some other fonts suggestions worked for your appreciation and let me know what do you think.
If you need anything more feel free to ask.
Your feedback is always welcome.
Thank you.
Kindly Regards,
João
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