Can you lower the river to be closer to the word Canoe? and make the river strips a little thicker? Maybe this would make the logo components looks more connected?
Ok, can you make any further changes now, or do we have to wait until a winner is selected to make final edits? I would like to see the scale of the river strips slightly thicker?
I'm sorry I can't grant your request to make the river flow to form Canoe, the reason is that I don't make Canoe shape in the blind phase. I'm so sorry I couldn't make it because I respect other designers. I'm so very sorry :(
Could you try slight reshaping the mark to look more like the shape of a canoe instead of a river...maybe thicken the mark slightly and reshape both ends to have a sharper angle (like the angle of a canoe). Also, could you provide a version without the "C", and turn the mark 90 degrees to be vertical. Thanks for you help with this...love the logo!
The "prominent C and wave design" at the top doesn't appear to be centered on the script below. Can you adjust so that all facets appear centered? Maybe need to elongate the "E" in Canoe?
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I'm sorry I can't grant your request to make the river flow to form Canoe, the reason is that I don't make Canoe shape in the blind phase. I'm so sorry I couldn't make it because I respect other designers. I'm so very sorry :(
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