in my opinion the small back part should darker to give dimension (from light to dark-follow the light/sun) and the shadow of tree will covered the light from the top.
but is up to you my friend, if you want to change I will change for you
Should the small back part be that darker color or do you think it should be the lighter color like in the front of the picture? I am asking for your opinion on this.
I like the main color of the water but the turquoise is too drastic of a change. Please make the area that is now turquoise a shade lighter than the main color.
I actually like the chairs the color they are better than any of the revisions. However, I am not very happy with the shapes of the colors of the water. All of the revisions still show those shapes. Can you change that?
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remove the camera frame
make the text white
change the circle color white ( also I made alternative circle color white position on entry #150 )
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- make the water look more like a lake
- move the trees to the other side of the water.
- make the tent and campfire a bit larger
- make a couple chairs around the fire.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
Thanks. The water looks more like the ocean than a lake though. Please make the water look more like a lake and move the trees to the other side of the water. Can you make the tent and campfire a bit larger and put a couple chairs around the fire?
Getting closer! Please make the grey a little darker; more of a medium grey. Also, let's remove the mountains and just do a lake scene with trees and the tent and campfire.
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- remove the black border around "in" and "the" and make the letters black.
- remove the green in front of the mountains.
- remove the beige accents on the camera and make the entire camera a light/medium grey
- make the round button black.
Thanks! Please remove the black border around "in" and "the" and make the letters black. Please remove the green in front of the mountains. Also, can you please remove the beige accents on the camera and make the entire camera a light/medium grey. The round button black.
I don't think we can incorporate the map in your designs. Take out the map in the lens and put "In The" on the left and right of the lens and Southeast on the bottom. Can you change the image - I'd like to use a tent and trees similar to the image I uploaded. I'd also like to delete the canoe and the green that is there. Move the fire pit up closer to the water so you can see it and put a fire in it.
Please remove the .com, remove the yellow at the top of the camera and put the word CAMPING there. Finish the camera outline on the bottom and center IN THE SOUTHEAST in that area (bottom part of the camera). Thank you!
Hi,
I like how you incorporated the camera. Can you show some different options for the image in the center - a tent, the forest, a lake with canoes. I'd like to see some different color options too and also see some different options for the placement of the words. Thank you!
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but is up to you my friend, if you want to change I will change for you
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lake color gradient.
what do you thing?
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the whole lake the middle color blue
just a little bit at the waters edge the turquoise
what do you thing?
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remove the tree reflection
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the chairs the same color as the tent.
make the reflection of the trees on the water a little lighter
any other?
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lake color.
am I in right direction?
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color lake change
any other?
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I like the reflection of the trees.
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make the lake dark blue with the reflection of the tree behind.
what do you thing?
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dark blue lake with dark blue chair
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dark blue lake with forest green chair
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dark blue lake with black chair
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what do you thing?
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just let me know if you need more revision.
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change black to green
any other?
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make the background circle black
am I in the right direction?
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change the outline grey to black
am I right?
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which one you want to change to the black, the outline text or the circle?
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any other suggestion?
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remove the camera frame
make the text white
change the circle color white ( also I made alternative circle color white position on entry #150 )
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Please remove the camera portion outside of the ring. Make the letters white and the grey black and the inner ring white.
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just let me know if you need more to revision.
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- move the chair close to the other chair
- remove the tent pole
anything else?
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- add more trees to the horizon
any other?
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- move the tree behind the horizon
am I right?
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- make the water look more like a lake
- move the trees to the other side of the water.
- make the tent and campfire a bit larger
- make a couple chairs around the fire.
what do you thing?
any other suggestion?
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- make the grey a little darker
- remove the mountains
any other suggestion?
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please check my revision on entry #105
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- remove the black border around "in" and "the" and make the letters black.
- remove the green in front of the mountains.
- remove the beige accents on the camera and make the entire camera a light/medium grey
- make the round button black.
any other suggestion?
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replace IN and THE
change the tent
and the fire pit up
did I miss something?
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please check on entry #80
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any other suggestion?
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what do you thing?
also you can check another version on entry #77
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you can check your request on entry #78
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any other suggestion?
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what do you thing?
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you can check some alternative base on feedback on entry #33 and #34
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I like how you incorporated the camera. Can you show some different options for the image in the center - a tent, the forest, a lake with canoes. I'd like to see some different color options too and also see some different options for the placement of the words. Thank you!
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any feedback for my entry?
just let me know if you have any suggestion and I will HELP you to make revision.
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