Good incorporation of Up with People and Camp Horizons. Can you push it a little farther? Please see my new comments on the main contest page for some ideas. Also, there are a lot of drop shadows and outlines--can you smooth/refine a little bit to give it a bit more updated look?
Thanks for taking the time to work on my contest! I appreciate it.
Thanks for taking my comment and re-working the logo. I'm still feeling like camp is #1 in the visual hierarchy and Up with People is second--I'd like to see that switched. Camp is where the program is being held, but the purpose is Up with People (singing, dancing, international focus, bringing different cultures together). I'd love to see some concepts that put focus more on the Up with People aspect of the program and think outside the box (think of how can that be represented besides just the star).
For entries #1 and #2, could you show me what it would look like if you replaced the rays of the sun with a globe and made the star a shooting star off to the right? That may show the international aspect a litle more and would still incorporate the shooting star that is the Up with People logo.
#59 reworked with globe yet still incorporating elements of other logos and more emphasis on "up with people". Let me know if this is what you were looking for.
#76 and #78-I actually prefer some of your previous designs, but thanks for working on the additional options for me! I think there's a little too much going on these that the eye doesn't know what to look at, and it took a few minutes for me to recognize the shapes as people. Thank you though!