Camp SummerGoldLogo Design Contest

Entry 19 shows the girls together form their own sun.

btw--if you would like to see variations on anything (colors, fonts, adjustments to forms, suggestions...) please ask. Happy to do.

Feedback (even what you don't like--but stated nicely :-) and direction are welcome.

thanks
C

#18 is very creative and unique! Girls Forming their own sun is great. Do you think it wouldn't compromise the great design by making them more girl like? I think this font goes so well but I wonder if it could be a bit bolder? Or a bit darker? Thanks!

#21 I like the circle you put in it. But I think I like #18 without the middle red. It's pretty though. I think if you wouldn't mind looking at a different font that might work with the art. Only if you think there is another cool one. Up to you. I guess I just want to make it somewhat easy to see and it might be my old eyes and the s and the u. It is very cool!

#20 is great but probably my teenage girls won't be attracted to it. Its great though.

#18 I do like the font you have. :) I might just be over thinking it. It does work well. When I enlarge it it looks fine.

22 has an adjustment to the girl figure. I can still work on this and would be happy to take direction on what would work for you in taking it further. I have also weighted the font a bit more, but i can also try some others if you would like to see. There are hundreds of fonts (not that i want to try each one, :-) but....

thanks for the feedback and direction. much appreciated
carla

#22 thanks! Bolder is great!

I think i may want to change the head/hair shape. maybe to a pony tail or something?

#21 just had a thought about this one. The center could be the earth? This camp is going to be into their planet. It might not work with the design and...I get that. Do you mind? Don't post if you think not. :)

Oh sorry just read your note..yes...hair of some kind...teen girls mostly wear it down. Ponytail yes as long as they don't look too young...longer pony tails help I think!!!!!
Thank youuuuu!!!!

#30 and #29.Wow. Love the earth and heart! Thanks! cool!. I need my co-business partner to see. It is Mother's Day and she and I are getting together tomorrow. She is out to dinner tonight with her family. Your first font might be the best :) but don't worry about that right now....we can wait and see :) thank you! :)

Also, thank you for writing!:)

#40!!!!!!!! The proportion is good! I love your other ones. The hand one is interesting with the heart.

If you want me to be able to enter anything tonight, I'll have to be ranked in the top 5. (if something pops out for me.....) since it is just about out of the open phase.

Thanks so much for your comments and direction. Much appreciated. Glad you are liking some of them. Sounds great about you taking some time to appreciate Mother's Day and checking with your partner tomorrow. I look forward to hearing from you again then.

thanks
C

#38 the hands become birds (one holding a heart the other a leaf to represent care of earth/environment) (the better to fly high with ideas and self empowerment)---anyway, that's the theme, don't know how apparent.
:-)
C

#40 Hi! I still like this aqua color very much, but if you would I would like to see it in a dark or neon pink! Yes, a pink world! :) thanks again!

pink. it reminds me of my niece (throughout her high school years and to be honest, still in her 20's). Actually I think a pink world is a great idea. Be nice to get to that point in the world again where everythings rosey. :-)

C

#59 through #64! Love love love the words below and the art!

#55 #56 look great in pink too.

#59 and #62 both strong. I like 62 and those words choices. I do like #59 Art . I can see why those words work well. Nice! #64 is good too.

I can't thank you enough. Your designs are great and they really give us all great possibilities. My co- director and I are going to be together in the same room to look at these today! Be back with you! Thanks again!

Thanks for your pink note about your niece! I agree 100 percent that we need rosey again. :)

#89 pretty! Wow

Any suggestions or directions that might possibly put me into first again if executed well?

c

#64 I meant to ask you this earlier. By the way, great new ones and love your spirit about this! With #64 can you make the letters just darker or bolder...?Camp Summergold font is great with this one and like the colors.

102 has a little different color scheme. If you have any color schemes on any of my entries you would like to see, or would like me to try a different font, please don't hesitate to ask.

thanks
c

i'm sort of glad you are connecting with the sort of abstract watercolor butterfly with the girl emerging into and embracing the growth and change she goes through in reaching for the star since i think the style sort of clicks into the whole idea of you working with the girls in the arts as well as other things. And the semi-circle representing the earth connects with the stewardship, etc. Also, it's not so abstract that kids can't connect but also isn't " childish"

108 is only different by some slight adjustments to placement on the lines of type.

#106 and #90 we were wondering how it might look with this on the left of the words instead of above. Just curious to see that. I am so thankful for your work here. So many great ones that you have done! And we only get one. Ugh ! :)

#1 would you give us this one again without the words under the name? Thank you. We just to compare the two with and without. :)

#1. Also wondering if this would work. Instead of create change...which is still a strong choice...but whatif we said
All About Girls, or Its All About Girls...that might be too much ...or Girls Lead and then with three words below. I am a big fan of butterflies...they are all over my office! :)

#1 Hi!!! I also would like to see this one the same but just without create change altogether but keeping your wonderful words below. :)

#111 Hi again! Can you make the figure stand out slightly more? And can you make gold more orange? The three words could be bolder and the full width of the logo. Can we see Camp SummerGold with all lower case? Thanks again!!!!

some different options in 116-120 (some with shadow, some without, etc.) happy to do other variations, other combos of what i did, etc., just ask.

thanks.
C

Thank you! Many of our friends and family have weighed in on this one especially. What do you think about The changes? i am not sure the rules let me Ask you.

The only thing I wonder about is the g in gold...should it be completed more , that loop, if we need to reproduce it, or if it goes on a t-shirt, etc. ?

Of course you are free to ask opinions (except any opinions on other specific designers work), but anything about my work or general opinions on things.... I sort of liked the g especially (has a bit of charm to it/difference, yet still totally recognizable and readable as a g), but that is my opinion and the one thing with a logo is that you need to be able to connect to it (the more you feel good about it, the easier it is to "put out to the world" and the more likely you will. So if you would like me to try something different for the g or try a different font or....

You will also be getting an eps file with which changes can be made by another designer or printer or to the file if down the line you decide you want to make changes or if you need other file types for various output.

let me know if there are any other things you might like to see.

Carla

I just wanted you to weigh in on your own design. :) thank you Carla! We are inspired by your work!!!!

thank you! that's the best kind of compliment.
:-)
C

:) thanks for doing this!!!

123 which i uploaded tonight is a slightly cleanup up version of the one currently in first (119).

ok...thanks so much!

Thanks so much for declaring me the winner.

I have sent some private messages regarding the download and final approval process, but haven't heard anything back. Clicking that final approval transfers rights to you (and allows me to be paid :-), but if there is something wrong with the files, i need to know so i can deal with that right away. The first private message i sent with the subject : Final File Upload and approval process, is the most important one, as it explains what to do to download and complete the contest and what i need to send you pngs, etc. Logo Tournament will contact me when the approval comes through. (You can ignore the one that says to wait a few minutes before downloading, because that adjustment was completed within minutes and a notification that all was okay sent right after.)

It's been a pleasure working with you, and would love to complete everything so that rights to the logo can be transferred.
Carla