Thanks for your submissions. These are creative. I think we want something with a container -- like a circle or square or some definite shape. No text with white space by itself. I like your elements used here, but we probably want a simpler look. Just one or two large simple symbols. Thanks.
I really like #26. One change though -- I'm thinking I would like the "Explore California" much larger and more readable. What could you do to make this logo into a rectangle or box shape. Maybe rounded edges or something? Just would like some different looks. Thanks.
I came up with #33. I need to step away from the computer for the rest of the night but I can keep trying tomorrow. Actually, I think any shape I use I don't think I can get the words too much bigger but I look forward to your feedback.
In #63, the text was meant to be flowing with the banner. It would be hard to have a waving banner with straight text. That would look somewhat unnatural I think but I can try it.
In #64, I adjusted the letter "C." That may have been the problem and I adjusted the kerning on the word "explore" to make it flow better with the word California. I also changed the font on Winter Camp. I think it looks pretty good; let me know what you think.
Ok, I don't think the sash style will work. If you have other ideas, go for it. I like you original shape better than the sash. Still need a better font. Thanks.
In #68 and #69, I tucked in the sides of the banner so it is not as prominent and I used Minion Pro in #69 and I used a similar font to the SEI one in #68. Let me know your thoughts.