Looks nice, could you give more definition to the hummingbird if possible and add the (R), registration mark at the end of "Chic" and if possible pink and blue colors with "cali" in black, thanks..
My partner says she likes this one, color in the hummingbird with more definition and give the wings definition as well, remember (2) colors: light blue and pink colors with the (R) registration at the end of "Chic(R)"...your ranking has improved. Good job!!