C.O.A.T. SoapLogo Design Contest

Hi, thanks for the feedback, here's my revision.

Closer to what we were thinking, with the shower concept, but there is too much body showing, (see our example picture) also the shower head looks like a light, now water falling, can we also lighten his skin tone a tad bit?

Hi, thanks for the feedback, revision uploaded. Hope I'm working on the right direction.

We really like this, but we would like the man to be in a shower, and have bubbles covering him. Can we make his skin color a tad bit darker? We love the trophy in it, maybe try to incorporate it in the shower scene, like on the soap dish area and holding a bar of soap.