Hi Stodart,
Thanks for your feedback, I'll do the revision for you. But before that can I ask you a question? Is the two horses design at your contest attachment is yours or it just a reference from another contest entry? what I mean is this:
http://3ef44ac2a814e81509fd-288404e13f895703cf2798bf6ae95228.r56.cf1.rackcdn.com/741051796720-223.pngThanks,
Edwin