I appreciate your feedback! Unfortunately, the contest has ended, and I can't upload new entries now. Only the designer in the first place can make updates. Thank you for understanding!"
Thank you so much for your creativity and work! I see this could be great for another future application and would like to stay in touch with you for a future application.
Thank you for your edits! Liking how the dogs stand out more with color.
I like the color of the lettering here more than in #193 and #194.
I like the color of field and mountains more in #193
Would prefer less tan color and more light medium golden color with lighter shading under tail.
The dog in front lacks a proud, happy confident look.
Looks a little lumpy, fat, submissive (ears back) and sad.
Could tighten jowl line up. Give a little more neck / lesson thickness of neck.
Dog in back:
Remove dark line above dog’s rear — it gives the appearance of lumpy top line.
Rear leg looks weak, needs a little more substance and bend of stifle.
Thank you for the kind words! I'm glad to be a finalist. I've made the updates to enhance the dogs, adding a golden outline and light gold shading to make them pop as the main focal point. Please let me know if there are any further adjustments you'd like or if this meets your expectations. Looking forward to your feedback!
Congratulations finalist! Appreciate all your work.
Is it possible to make the dogs pop more as the main point, maybe outline color golden or light gold shading?
Thank you so much for your submissions. I like the clean lines of your work. Nice to see this new added color and mountains!
Your dog choices overall have been the best! That’s super important to me and a lot of people don’t get that.
I’d like to see this version with the two dogs facing same direction and mouth closed.
Other possible edits, but I’m not sure if would clutter it up too much by adding:
• Vermont
• EST 1998
Thank you for participating!
+ Nice choice of Golden.
+ I like the smooth outline, pleasing head on Golden.
- Ears could be less angular and a little more rounded.
• Not sure of “Butternut” font — little harsh and messy
+ I like the “Butternut” font
• Not sure about size of truck in proportion to dog, maybe would be ok if it was more in the distant background
• would like layered mountains, the outline of Mount Mansfield for example.
Thank you!
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Can you make front dog a little lighter than back dog?
Can you change the yellow mountain to the same color as the light gold shading on the back dog?
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I like the color of the lettering here more than in #193 and #194.
I like the color of field and mountains more in #193
Would prefer less tan color and more light medium golden color with lighter shading under tail.
The dog in front lacks a proud, happy confident look.
Looks a little lumpy, fat, submissive (ears back) and sad.
Could tighten jowl line up. Give a little more neck / lesson thickness of neck.
Dog in back:
Remove dark line above dog’s rear — it gives the appearance of lumpy top line.
Rear leg looks weak, needs a little more substance and bend of stifle.
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Can I see a color swap between yellow and green areas?
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Is it possible to make the dogs pop more as the main point, maybe outline color golden or light gold shading?
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Your dog choices overall have been the best! That’s super important to me and a lot of people don’t get that.
I’d like to see this version with the two dogs facing same direction and mouth closed.
Other possible edits, but I’m not sure if would clutter it up too much by adding:
• Vermont
• EST 1998
Thank you for participating!
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Could we see with 2 Goldens, no truck and mountain outline / scene similar to VT postage stamp in uploads?
Thank you!
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+ Golden figure is ok — not as good as #31
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+ Nice choice of Golden.
+ I like the smooth outline, pleasing head on Golden.
- Ears could be less angular and a little more rounded.
• Not sure of “Butternut” font — little harsh and messy
+ I like the “Butternut” font
• Not sure about size of truck in proportion to dog, maybe would be ok if it was more in the distant background
• would like layered mountains, the outline of Mount Mansfield for example.
Thank you!