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Has potential but some edits needed:
1. Most importantly: Quality of dog misses the mark. Please see uploads for ideas. As a breeder, this is super important.
2. Would like to see 3 Goldens. For example, outside beside truck or in the distance in the field.
3. Mountains do not look like the mountains in Vermont. Please see uploads for ideas.
4. Add: Golden Retriever Experience
5. Add: EST 1998
6. Add: Vermont
Nice colors and concept.
1. Can you make the mountains look more like Vermont Green Mountains?
2. Dog on tailgate needs to be a more showy and proud, more in proportion to truck. See zip file for examples.
3. Not sure about dog jumping over truck. Maybe jumping into truck? Or just paws up on tailgate like about to jump in.
4. Truck a less antique.
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Has potential but some edits needed:
1. Most importantly: Quality of dog misses the mark. Please see uploads for ideas. As a breeder, this is super important.
2. Would like to see 3 Goldens. For example, outside beside truck or in the distance in the field.
3. Mountains do not look like the mountains in Vermont. Please see uploads for ideas.
4. Add: Golden Retriever Experience
5. Add: EST 1998
6. Add: Vermont
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1. Can you make the mountains look more like Vermont Green Mountains?
2. Dog on tailgate needs to be a more showy and proud, more in proportion to truck. See zip file for examples.
3. Not sure about dog jumping over truck. Maybe jumping into truck? Or just paws up on tailgate like about to jump in.
4. Truck a less antique.