Busy Mom LearningLogo Design Contest

Could you make Busy and Mom a lighter font weight? It looks really heavy handed. Also, less petals and dots on the clock. It's supposed to be an abstract image of a flower being like a clock, but not actually having all the numbers of the clock represented. Thanks!

Also please remove the circle around the flower. It makes it look too concrete an image instead of the abstract look of a flower being a clock.

Also, not crazy about the flower being encased in a circle. Makes it look too much like a fruit.

Clock is too concrete. The graphic was to be a little abstract and lead moms to use their imagination. Remove 5 of the petals and dots and rearrange them back into a circle. Also you can use different colors. I had suggested four. Thanks!

Clock is too concrete. The graphic was to be a little abstract and lead moms to use their imagination.

Logo looks too busy with all the petals. Not trying to replace all the numbers on the clock, but give the illusion that the flower can be a clock.

Hi....

Thanks for feedback, update proposal #45 #44 #43 and #42, let me know your thoughts.

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Jefry

The word learning is too small, gets lost in the logo type. The flower should have a petal removed between the clock hands and the clock needs to be bigger so you can see the design. Maybe it is too detailed of an icon to be seen that small.

I like the font but the mom in the clock reminds me too much of the Wendy’s fast food logo. I don’t need to invoke a mom image but something to denote learning. Thank you.

Clever use of the “o” but the design is too detailed to be that small.

I like the font for busy mom. Could you remove the petal that is in between the clock hands? Otherwise I thought it looked like a citrus slice. Thank you b

Greetings...

I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful

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Jefry