Could you make Busy and Mom a lighter font weight? It looks really heavy handed. Also, less petals and dots on the clock. It's supposed to be an abstract image of a flower being like a clock, but not actually having all the numbers of the clock represented. Thanks!
Clock is too concrete. The graphic was to be a little abstract and lead moms to use their imagination. Remove 5 of the petals and dots and rearrange them back into a circle. Also you can use different colors. I had suggested four. Thanks!
The word learning is too small, gets lost in the logo type. The flower should have a petal removed between the clock hands and the clock needs to be bigger so you can see the design. Maybe it is too detailed of an icon to be seen that small.
I like the font but the mom in the clock reminds me too much of the Wendy’s fast food logo. I don’t need to invoke a mom image but something to denote learning. Thank you.
I like the font for busy mom. Could you remove the petal that is in between the clock hands? Otherwise I thought it looked like a citrus slice. Thank you b
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Thanks for feedback, update proposal #45 #44 #43 and #42, let me know your thoughts.
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Jefry
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I submit a new designs proposal. I am open for feedback, don't hesitate to let me know. Your feedback is very useful
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Jefry