Feedback from my focus group says that I should either have each word be a different color or have Busy and Mom be the same color since that is my target audience, not the mom learning. Could you please adjust?
The extra dot over the "I" since it is already a capital letter isn't needed. In looking at the flower this way, it reminds me of a peacock. Not the effect I was going for.
Can the center of the petals be transparent? There is competition between the dot on the clock and the dot on the “i” that makes it look tangled. Also the spacing between the letters makes mom learning look like one word.
Comment Activity
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Please check #41
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn
Withdrawn