Could I see a version as described above and then a version with it reversed? I.e. Busy Mom all teal green, and learning and the petals the watermelon red that Mom font currently is. Thank you so much.
My focus group really likes this one. Their comments were could Busy be the same color as Mom as it is the "busy mom" that goes together. Then make learning the same teal green as the petals.
Thank you for the variation on #53. I prefer the font you used in #53 better for learning. The heavier font weight for learning does make the word pop but not a fan of how they do their "n".
Nice. Could the flower clock move over to the right so the lowest dot is centered over the right side line of the N? It just looks crowded against the word Busy. Thanks.
The clock now looks like a true clock. Can we have the points of the petals face inwards and two fewer petals and make them a little larger. The first iteration was closer, just needed to be a complete circle. Thanks.
I like turning the Y's tail into the stem, but now it makes the flower look like a 'chicken monster' (my daughter's words) and less like a clock flower. I was reminded of a peacock. So can we angle the flower petals to look less bird like?
Could I see a flower click that is a complete circle of petals and dots? The gap in my original design was because the clock hands were in that space. Now that you have moved the clock hands, the space seems unnecessary and should have petals in it.
This has possibilities. Could I see it with the colors reversed? Meaning, have Busy Mom be the teal color and Learning and the flower be the cranberry?
The placement of the flower clock looks like she is wearing a hat. But I like the emphasis on Busy Mom and the learning in a different type set and color.
Not crazy on how heavy the clock looks on the type face. The font for Busy looks like it’s being crushed by the clock. Not the energy I want these moms to feel who are already stretched.
I like how you polished up my original idea and the layout of the type. The flower clock looks bunched up against the type. Could you move the petals around so it looks more balanced against the words?
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