Hi, here is my submissions (#1, #2, #3, #4). Hopefully pleased. Please feel free to contact me for any requests. And please let me know if you need any changes/modification. Thanks
OK. Here's my updates (#11 and #12) for the revision like as your request. Please let me know if you need any other changes, I will ready to do it. Thanks
I think the nose can be shorten a litte bit. The latest one have a more square shape which is better then the original rounder shape, but it's a little bit too long. I tried to play around with it on Photoshop and shorten it and I like it better, but I don't know how to show you as I can't attached any picture via comment
Also the body shape of the pegasus is a bit too rounded, if it can be a bit stronger it might look better. It's hard to explain but if you look at the other entry the pegasus on the other design have a stronger shape and overall I like that shape and the length and shape of the nose is good as well.
OK, here's my updates (#24, #25, #26, #27) with more stronger shape and normal nose of pegasus. Please let me know if you need any other changes, I will always ready to do it. Thanks