Could you do one more version. Please see the attached logo "Southern Forests" and do a version with similar typography. Single line uppercase and smaller font.
Could you scale down the size of the font a bit. It's a bit big and loses balance with the image. Maybe reduce the length and width a little on the two lines.
..some think the orange trail looks more like a straight road with the white edge lines; Any way to change the white lines into gentle S-curves to give idea of meandering path? Thx.
Pictorial looks fine. Still not sure about the font: Maybe a version with more informal look, like Mistral, MV Boli, Segoe Script or similar? And try Bushwalking WA all on one line; And would a sloping/curved/shaped text line work?
The bird shape is better, but the wispy tail doesn't look like a cockatoo. See pictures at end of brief docx. Having the two different bird shapes (as in the docx), but smaller could be better as the birds move in flocks.
A less 'blocky' font for textwould be better, (eg Beatnik SF or similar?), and maybe with more informal look, like Mistral, MV Boli, Segoe Script or similar?) Font color might be better to be green (more nature color, or maybe just black). Trees OK but maybe less saturated colors for hills, water etc.
Bird shape doesn't work well: looks like a hawk not a cockatoo parrot. See updated brief docx for typical bird shapes, but leave out if it makes logo too cluttered.
Too closely mimics the Southern Forest logo.
Check brief; Need hiker figures;
Trees not typical WA shape.
Bushwalking WA needs to be all same font. Could include some orange/ochre clolor around path to suggest part desert envro. with water to left.
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A simpler font might look better. WA needs to be same sized caps as the 'B'.
Check brief; Need hiker figures;
Trees not typical WA shape.
Bushwalking WA needs to be all same font. Could include some orange/ochre clolor around path to suggest part desert envro. with water to left.