Could you please test how a smaller font size for the text would look on this version. So that the text line is no wider than the width of the picture. Thx
Apologies, after all your good work on the suns rays, everyone seems to prefer the long rays on this one after all.
Please change the trees on this to be same as the trees #126 (with the thin lower tree trunks).
Top parts in #118 are correct, but not the bottom parts: Can you combine the top (leafy part of the trees from #118 (or same #106) but use the narrow bottom part (trunks) from this one (#117)? Thx.
Sorry, you have the lower, trunk part of the trees looking good, but top (leafy) part of big tree in original #106 looked better, extended more to left and gave logo better balance. Thx.
Sorry, the top leafy parts of the trees were fine without change, as in the original, like #106.
You have correctly changed the vertical (single) wood trunks to make them thinner, but can you leave the tops of the trees as in #106? Apologies for any confusion caused.
This works better than I thought it would! Will have to see tomorrow morn what others feel.
Had meant to say earlier, in all versions your tree trunk shapes widen quite a lot toward base whereas the typical trees here have quite straight trunks (see the Southern Forests and Manjimup logo in the docx brief. Would be better to straighten the trunks a little. Thx.
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Thank you for continue feedback..
I sent some adjustment, Hope this like what you want.. #111, #112, #113, and #114
if you need others, please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
I'll pleasure
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
See new comment on #106 : Unfortunately the yellow/orange sun centre loses the nice light feel of #106. Could try smaller white sun with no rays; Also maybe a very light blue sky with a small yellow sun, but may not have same good feel as #106. Thx
No problem. Let's try to progress the 3 variations and see where we get to.
This #106 still has good look as the white sun gives light centre to logo and looks like the walkers are walking into a new dawning day rather than a sunset. Just need to find a way of removing the rays without losing the good effect. Thx.
Also about provide three different variations, I apologize LT not allowed to provide different logo .
and that's will be a violations..
hope you understand..
but if just a little variations same concept in minor changes, I thinks that's fine..
hope you understand.
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Hello..
Thank you so much,
for change the sun with yellow please check my new rev #107 use a slightly orange color because the bg is yellow if use yellow for sun will not too visible. #108 make bg a light yellow so the sun will more visible..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Great work, thank you. We are liking the options you are putting forward. One other small change that has been requested by the board is removing the sun rays. Maybe the sun could be an orangey colour if you think it looks good.
Could I also ask. If we do select your logo, are you able to provide the three different variations you have done? This is because we are building a new website and would like to see them in context before deciding. The top three are what we like.
Could you do one more version. Please see the attached logo "Southern Forests" and do a version with similar typography. Single line uppercase and smaller font.
Hello again,
Thank you for your continue feedback..
I sent some font variations, if need others font please let me know..
I'll pleasure..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Good changes! Shape more interesting. Walkers & landscape idea looking good. Still not convinced on choice of font and could be better as uc and lc (Bushwalking WA) Font is simple, but quite 'heavy': Would something like Beatnik SF or similar work), and maybe with more informal look if use a font like Mistral, MV Boli, Segoe Script or similar?
As mentioned previously, could maybe try less saturated colours for the green of hill, the orange and blue?
Not sure that the cockatoo bird looks right in that position -maybe leave out after all.
Also, preferably will need a version 2 that can optionally stand alone without the Bushwalking WA text. ie Just the pictorial. (So that we have flexibility to add same name alongside the logo on website banner etc without having name repeated in logo.)
As in your other version, could maybe also try less saturated colours.
Also, see added cockatoos image at end of updated brief (v.3). Could add interest at edge of yellow 'sky' area.
Concept good.
Bushwalking WA text needs to be all same font and not with 'Western Australia' in full. Preferably a simpler font.
Preferable if grren area could be domed more into a hill shape to evoke hill/s.
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sure,
#133 with title text
#134 reduce the distance between letters so the text no wider than picture
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please check #131 and #132
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Please change trees also on this one to same as on the other high ranked. Thx
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no matter please check
#127, #128, #129 and #130
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Change font to same as #106. Thx.
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Please change the trees on this to be same as the trees #126 (with the thin lower tree trunks).
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Please check #120, #121, #122, #123, #124 and #126 for variations
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Amanterkendali
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Sun good & trees good.
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please check #119
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For trees, see comments from #117. Thx.
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how about #117?
no worries, if this not yes fit I'll pleasure to fit it..
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Amanterkendali
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You have correctly changed the vertical (single) wood trunks to make them thinner, but can you leave the tops of the trees as in #106? Apologies for any confusion caused.
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please check #115 and #116 I changes the tree trunks, hope this what you mean.. :)
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Amanterkendali
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Had meant to say earlier, in all versions your tree trunk shapes widen quite a lot toward base whereas the typical trees here have quite straight trunks (see the Southern Forests and Manjimup logo in the docx brief. Would be better to straighten the trunks a little. Thx.
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Thank you for continue feedback..
I sent some adjustment, Hope this like what you want..
#111, #112, #113, and #114
if you need others, please feel free and don't hesitate for ask me..
I'll pleasure
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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This #106 still has good look as the white sun gives light centre to logo and looks like the walkers are walking into a new dawning day rather than a sunset. Just need to find a way of removing the rays without losing the good effect. Thx.
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and that's will be a violations..
hope you understand..
but if just a little variations same concept in minor changes, I thinks that's fine..
hope you understand.
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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Thank you so much,
for change the sun with yellow please check my new rev
#107 use a slightly orange color because the bg is yellow if use yellow for sun will not too visible.
#108 make bg a light yellow so the sun will more visible..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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Could I also ask. If we do select your logo, are you able to provide the three different variations you have done? This is because we are building a new website and would like to see them in context before deciding. The top three are what we like.
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Thank you for your continue feedback..
I sent some font variations, if need others font please let me know..
I'll pleasure..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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here #70
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Not sure that the cockatoo bird looks right in that position -maybe leave out after all.
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
I apologize just back to my PC
I'll work on it..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
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Also, see added cockatoos image at end of updated brief (v.3). Could add interest at edge of yellow 'sky' area.
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Could maybe also try less saturated colours. Thx.
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Bushwalking WA text needs to be all same font and not with 'Western Australia' in full. Preferably a simpler font.
Preferable if grren area could be domed more into a hill shape to evoke hill/s.