Congratulations! We are excited to work with you to finalize this. We have a couple of very busy days ahead of us but I promise we will be in touch. We’re very close but would like to do a little bit of refining with you. Just like you’ve been doing up to this point. Thanks!
If it wasn’t stretched, just do the opposite and squish the letters just a little. So they are around the height as the font in #112. Maybe it won’t look right but I’d like to see it.
Using this version, will you undo something I asked before? I had you stretch the height of the letters on BUSHMAN. Will you bring it back to the regular default height and show us?
Also, move the word a tiny bit higher, away from the plane.
To be clear: keep the plane and bushman proportionate to each other now. I don’t think the plane should be any wider, relative to that word. This is the max.
It's already pretty balanced, but perhaps the word BUSHMAN and the plane get larger, and the words GROOMING CO. stay the same size. If you could propose a few variations of that, we can probably finalize this.
Love the bolder font. Let's focus on this one! Earlier you did a version where you brought the plane in bigger/closer. We still like the wider wings and larger propeller though. so can you use this plane, but make it larger? I don't know if the wings should match the width of the word Bushman. That may be too wide. but play with that and let's see. We're very close now.
Can you show me this one in another variation, with the curved underside to the word BUSHMAN? Stretch the letters a little as well to make them taller.
It's looking really good! Can you please:
- make the propeller slightly larger
- remove the little dash at the bottom
- stretch the wings a tiny bit so they match the width of the word below
We don't want the plane to be too sleek or abstract....it still needs to look like a beaver plane. but this one is chunky and feels child-like a little. something a bit more streamlined, wider wings, but still clearly a float plane would be great!
Closer! The proportions of the plane look off. Can you make the wings longer, so they go to the edges of the word "bushman"? Maybe a different plane altogether. I like the float skids you added, but the plane itself is still a little too cartoonish. We'd like something a bit more sleek and masculine.
This is a great start! The plane isn't quite right. Needs to be a "beaver" plane with float skids that allow the plane to land on water. Longer wings. And a little simpler, with less shadowing. Looking good though. keep going!
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2) move the word BUSHMAN up away from the plane a bit more please
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Also, move the word a tiny bit higher, away from the plane.
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Can you do the above please? we're really getting close here.
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- stretch the length of the wings a tiny bit so they are slightly wider than the width of the word below
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- make the propeller slightly larger
- remove the little dash at the bottom
- stretch the wings a tiny bit so they match the width of the word below
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