#13: This goes definitely into the right direction. I like the blue version better. I can also imagine that the fire comes out of the figures hand (or heart) or so. The optimism of the figure is great. It should be clear that it is the fire of the figure in a sense of life energy and that not the figure will be burned itself. Please try versions with 1. "burn-in" completely in blue, 2. "burn-in" completely in orange and "light your fire" in blue and 3. like it is at the moment but without the minus. Thank you for working with me! Kai
Hi Rick, thank you . I like your designs. I like the color combination of #17 because the "burn-in" looks a bit like flames on the "light your fire"-Base. The figure should keep the positive Spirit and it could be a bit less floating. It may be related a bit more to the ground. I like also to see a powerful dynamic.
Ok Kai let me workout the human figure to make it more attached to the ground, thank you very much for your feedback, as you can see copies of my work have arrived.
Wow, great to see all those different designs! Thank you! I like #38 because it is dynamic and grounded and the human being is in the foreground. The perspective looks like a view from Top. A view from a lower position would probably make the man even more important what could be a good effect. The man could look somewhat more happy and energised althou it goes absolutely into the right direction.
The flame is to me not absolutely clear as a flame. Looks a bit like he is holding a sports trophy. Maybe it becomes clearer with a more abstract light like a star.
Thanks Kai for your comments i really appreciate your guide, we are getting closer together!!
Let me experiment with different perspective as you suggest and probably using a more distinctive flame or star individually or together both concepts, soon more to come.
New Comment on #38 and #34: I am not so happy with the flame yet since it looks a bit like a drop of water. A style of the flame like in #36 would be great. And the caracter could have a bit more dynamic like a light jump in northeastern direction. #34: please use the Figure of #38 (or it's new jumping follower with a new flame) and size it half way to the size of #38. That could be a great version! What great work you do!
Thanks Kai i will be submitting UPDATES very soon on #38 and #34 i understand perfectly your needs just need a couple of hours to have all versions ready, thanks for your comments :)
#77 etc.: the jump looks to me in this version more like fleeing. And I find the stronger right leg not so good. The flames are definitly beter then before.
Got it Kai... i am submitting 3 new jump poses today just finishing details and having them ready for you, these new versions will look much better than #77, thanks again for your guide.
Hi Kai i saw you online and decided to submit 2 of the 3 poses i had sketched making the human figure more jumping like, i been taking probably much time studying a way to make look with triumph and accomplished an objective feeling and not as if the little guy is burning himself, i hope these entries are closer to your idea, will be submiting a third version soon, thanks.