This is very original and clean. It feels a bit retro, perhaps because it is b/w, so maybe add some color? Is there a way to integrate icons of people? The original direction of using a metaphor for a book or stories has shifted to using the attributes of people/community/family -- see some of the later comments I've posted. I like the style, but the left panel with the lines of copy isn't as important as the people.
#54 has become a favorite of a couple reviewers. They like the non traditional, sloping upward roof line. Our new building will have such a roof. They like the artistic and more abstract building shape. Looks great in b/w also.
There is a concern that the number of windows on the yellow panel looks like an industrial building, or a cell phone with buttons. Can you address that with fewer windows or some other way?
We don't think the sun is needed in the background, can delete that, or go back to stars
Could you put a person on the third panel, so two people bookend the building in the middle?
#75 is very nice! we like the diversity of roofs, colors, shapes. But the story book on the bottom might be unnecessary - can you show it without the book as a foundation, perhaps with a baseline as the foundation?