I have to appologize. According to the number this was done a while ago and I didn't see it until tonight trying to rank. I think the B part of the logo is strong enough you can remove the skyline and give it a more prominant position in the piece. If you had an I beam shape laying on the floor in front of it like a shadow with a simillar affect I don't even know if you would need the rest of the text. If i'm not being clear let me try it another way. When you look at a translucent cube I would put the B as you have it on the back wall and the I on the ground
Thank you for your efforts and I'm sorry i missed it until now.