Hello and thank you for your entry! The roach is pretty cool but I think that it is hard to tell what he is doing from far away. His hands really don't stand out. Could you try an angled view like most of the other entries? I would also like the lines thickened a little. at least in the body region. The detail is kind of lost the way it is now. Thanks!
Thanks! It is much more clear what the roach is doing. I'm not so sure that I like the type of target that you used. I think from far away it is hard to see the red dot in the middle of his forehead and the circle kind of looks like a halo expecially in drawing #8. I also don't think that the roach looks worried enough.