Buffalo General DentistryLogo Design Contest

#45 Maybe more like this?

Absolutely, thanks for your feedback!

please redesign the tooth, use more angular, modern lines for the tooth outline

carry the white of the buidlings all the way down the tooth root

rework the composition of the words inside the box, they should all have the same end margins, you may need to increase the font of Buffalo slightly.

can you make a couple more versions of this, the tooth border needs a revamp

#32 Hi.
I've reworked my design per your comments. Hopefully this is more like what you had in mind. : )
Kind regards,
Janis

Thank you for your feedback. I’ll work on another design and send over soon.

Try a different more modern looking tooth outline

Make the tooth outline thinner

Please bring the silhouette of the skyline within the tooth only. Make the tooth smaller bring the words “Buffalo” and “general dentistry” closer together to more resemble the layout in attachment1. Use attachment1 as a reference for font. The words implant Sedation Cosmetic should be below the box outside of the box at the bottom