Hello, nice work, but we need moré adjustments. I feel we need to clean the image, Its very saturared, we need less elements. Lets try to have the image without the línes under the plate. And please try to grow the typo.
I am not convinced about yours. On the Otero hand i have seen your portfolio and i really like. If you can please send me two moré different options completly diferents from the one you sent me and you Will probably win. Thanks