First off, thank you for your submission. I think that your design is perhaps the closest to striking the right connotation with our market. It's clean, simple and has the right "feel" to it. I do feel however, that there is something missing that could perhaps elevate it to exactly where we want to be. The marquee design above the font is perfect, however it may be confusing to some of our customers. Perhaps there is a way to make it have that "glow" that Broadway marquees emit? In addition, we feel that the font could also be a bit more glossy or eye catching. The font color is very close, but like the marquee it may lack a certain glow that our customer base is seeks. Thanks again, I hope we work something out!