Hey there. Great concept, but ... i feel its lacking testosterone. I will check with my business coach, as it may be perfect for my target audience, but not me. Try with out the - fast fitness line, and make the -Dont be afraid line more aggressive. maybe on an angle as a separate statement rather then part of the image. Also could you try .com.au under the bootcamps. Thanks for your time.
Re entry 18 - I like it but it still lacks testosterone/aggressiveness. Would it be wrong to include some barbed wire like ranking 1 (doesn't have to be 'boxed' just involved) . You could remove the - dont be afraid, its too hard to read. Please put on black back drop, with green boots(as is) and change Brisbane BootCamps to stand out colour eg White, silver, chrome.... Its getting much more appealing, thanks.
note once one designer has used a concept it is against LT rules to request another designer to use the same element... I will look for another way to make it "buff"???? should I take out the high heels? I thought you also wanted to appeal to women.
Thank you for your response and time. The new font is great, very clear and easy to read. Dislike the boot print, very over done for most bootcamps. Your idea of the different boots is great, and certainly appeals to a wide target market. The high heel is great, leave it in. I just have to decide now. Oh, could you try just one more think - The helmet, Make it the back drop, full size, and secondary, almost like if I was to make this into a sticker, the helmet would be the cut out (except for maybe a few jutting corners and letters [depending how big you make the helmet])
per your request - I had to do this in a hurry - only 2 hours left in contest (although the #1 ranked designer can do revisions to current designs for you) thanks for the feedback
ok, I have moved you to rank 1, to give us more time (if thats aloud) . I appreciate your efforts and time. I didnt mean for you to remove the boots sorry, they looked good. Re helmet, please soften into back ground and 1 tone, maybe same green as boots or similar. Please
Ok, so this is our last chance to make this work - May I please get, the helmet of #36 with the text of #33 and the boots of #17 on a black back drop. I think that will look great.