BreakoutLogo Design Contest

#10- I like the distortion and idea with the letters. Is there a way to keep that and clean it up just a bit? But the colors and idea behind it are really nice. And maybe add another element behind the word to add a little more to it. Thanks.

#17- I like the cleaned up letters and the concept left of the letters. What about an element behind the letters. Some sort of burst with color added to it. Thanks!

Thanks so much for your constructive feedback, I believe I'm getting closer to the design you have in mind. I've used bolder fonts with a cleaned up fracture in the word "break," as well as a color burst to help it visually explode. So far, it's the best execution of the concept.

I look forward to more feedback...thanks again for your interest!

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Same logo, milder color scheme.

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More mature color scheme.

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#33 and #34 are really great! Thanks.

Thinking about #34, I really like the strokes on the text and the sheen that it has. I like the colors too. I'm not 100% sold on the star emblem, I'd like to see another option on that, maybe something like the double arrows on #17. Also, I would like to see what it would like with the text in one color, and the emblem in another. Thanks!

Thanks again for your valuable feedback, I think your ideas definitely improve the design. I included a similar double-arrow emblem and unified the colors for the wordmark. Any thoughts?

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Yeah, we really like the direction on #51. Can you cleanup the word "break" so that it is easier to read? Also, could we flip the arrows so that they point left and sort of fit into the "B", framing the word, and then mirror that on the end of the word "out"? Thanks!

New version...cleaned up lettering with the "bracket" concept. Thanks again for the feedback!

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It looks nice. Can it appear more rounded instead of squared off.

Same design with rounded corners

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#77 is looking great! One last request, could you put a white stroke between the orange text and the black stroke that you already have on it. I think that would help the text pop a little more. Otherwise, I think this is right on track and looking great! Thanks!

could you try a different font on 77 that's not italicized?

Here's the updated concept that incorporates a thin white stroke in-between the black and orange text, along with a non-italicized font. Thanks for your interest in this design!

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#120- Can you keep the text and the arrows the same but change the stroke around the word and the border around the whole thing to black? Thanks.

#122- what about the color scheme of this one with the text shape of #120...and is there a way to see one without the arrows and maybe another element there instead of the arrows? Thanks.

similar concept, with star shapes integrated in the "B" and "T". Inspired by motocross design.

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Try 120 exactly the same but with the black boder like 119