Thank you very much for your submissions. We are very interested in #26, #28, #29, but we're wondering if you would be able to make a few changes for us.
We like how you have "BREAKAWAY" at the bottom of each design, but could we change it to read "BREAKAWAY POLICY"? And could we see the words like you have it now (at the bottom of the logo), and could we also see what all 3 logos look like with the words written to the right of the design (so you would have the logo and then centered and to the right of each design, you would have "BREAKAWAY POLICY" written.
Also, instead of shades of blue, could you make all designs shades of orange instead? So, a lighter orange and a darker orange (instead of the lighter/darker blue that you currently have)?
my professional advice, nix the web address in not required...there is to much reading and makes the overall look and feel too busy to be an effective design.
Logo are meant to read in 2 seconds if it take longer than that you've lost your audience. Plus not everyone has good vision and with the added text will be rather small on stationery and business cards.