Break Loose And Fly CoachingLogo Design Contest

Yes, like it much better. Thank You.

I see that the subline words stand out more, but now they interfere with the word Coaching. Can you try narrow Coaching and put a line in front and behind to bring some sort of separation?

I like this the best but I am still not sure if you could read the subline when printed on a business card?

I like this the best out of all other versions including your new ones. Let's stick with this bird for now. I will ask my team to give me feedback. Yhe only thing I see on this logo right now is that we would have to bold the bottom line somewhat to make the words more legible.

hi, will trying with another shape of bird then, thanks

This stands out better than #120. Can you finetune it a bit further? I like "Coaching" not to interfere as much with the message "Break Loose and Fly", so maybe make it a bit smaller and put an orange line in front and behind to keep the same space? Or maybe just use a dark gray instead of black?
Regarding the squares, can you make the two black squares shades of gray to see what that looks like?
I am not 100% in love with the shape of the bird. Can you try a different bird shape showing more "engergy" like how it feels to free yourself from what's holding you back?
Thanks so much. I appreciate your efforts!

After thinking about it some more, I have discover things about it that I really like. Could you change the brown to gray and black or a combination of. My color are black, gray and all shades of orange. We also need to integrate the subline in the logo.

Thank you but this is too busy and it's missing the subline words. Also, brown is not my brand color. Any other ideas?