Break Loose And Fly CoachingLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the variations. Out of all of them I like this the best.

See my comment from #60

I am worried that this layout is too wide and might not fit in some of the smaller print media. I would have to downsize and then the subline words would not be readable anymore.

I like this idea best. Can you put more emphazise on "Break Loose and Fly" maybe make it bolder? (coaching does not have to stand out as much) Also, I am a bit worried that the subline words are had to read, they are pretty small.

thanks for submitting several designs. This one is too dark plus it's a bit to steril for what I am trying to display (applies to this version in white too). Any other ideas of shwoing a break through?