Break Loose And Fly CoachingLogo Design Contest

This is better. Can you try to match the orange in my book cover? Its lighter and brighter. Or you could have some variations of orange in the logo just like you did for #25? Thanks!

Thanks but this color is completely off :(

I am sorry if I did not clearly communicated. We need to eliminate yellow from the logo (bottom bar should be orange) and for th logo with the sun I was wondering if we can have different shades of orange (lighter and darker) to replace the yellow?
Thanks!

new update #81

Can you change the bottom bar to solid orange and try taking the yellow out of the image with the sun replacing it with a lighter orange color. I like the variation in the logo.

no so much, too dark. The sun does reflect a new day, but I like the image to reflect "breaking free" more than just the light that comes up every day.

Can you lighten/darken the orange just as you have done in your earlier logo #18 with the yellow?

Like it including the color bar below which makes the transformation stand out, but still less yellow and more orange, like variations of orange (light to dark)

I like the general idea. The message "break loose and fly" should be separate from the word "coaching". Also "coaching" can be smaller than the message. Since yellow is not one of my brand colors perpaps change to orange. Any other ideas?

See comment I just made on your other logo. Thanks for submitting revisions.

Maybe forget about the bird and do something else to show of the "break loose and fly" message?
Also, Break Loose And Fly should be on the same line as it's the message, Coaching is my business which is not as important to the audience as the statement that they can indeed " break loose and fly" in the directions of their dreams.

I like the color variations of the bird but not the bird itself. A Hummingbird is pretty fragile - I don't want my audience relate to that