Could you please space the letters so that are slightly more apart. Please try to see if you can make the logo slightly smaller but still bigger than the words. Thanks again.
Thanks. We saw the changes. Which one is the one with Serif font?
We like the hand with the outline better. Could you change the hand such that it has an open palm instead of finger pointing upward? Can you have the person rest on top of the palm instead of the thumb?
Would you please also go back to #257 and remove all the sharp edges and the gaps inside the brain, and leave the rest as is?
Would you please take out the white outline of the hand? We'd like to see how it looks without it. Please also made the word "care" slightly bigger as long as you think it compliments the entire design.
Would you also provide a version with serif font? Thank you very much.
Hi could you please lower the hand so that the wrist is the brainstem, and have the hand comes down a little to point to the words on the right. The person could move towards the center if possible. Thank you for the revisions.
Hi, some of the feedback I received is that the brain and hand combined do not look like a brain. Please look up sagittal view of a brain and see if you can adjust the hand and brain so that it portraits the abstract of a brain and the brainstem. Thank you.
Thank you. Using the current design, would you please edit the marked place so that it does not stick out as much? Please give a black and white version and a small version of this one also. Thank you.
Please give us several new iterations based off of this design:
1 - significantly simplify the logo so the brain is very abstract
2 - show logo with various font type and font size combinations. Please also play with various spacing between letters.
3 - Show both this logo and logo with first change incorporated in all black with white background
4 - Show both this logo and logo with first change incorporated in a size fit for business card so I can see how it looks small.
5 - based on first change, also tilt the brain backwards so the front does not extend beyond the hand.
Thank you.
More comment on the word part of the logo. Please make font size of the word care smaller in relation to the other words. And make the entire three lines of texts smaller than the graphical portion of the logo. Also make the font color of the words a darker blue, same with the hand. Thanks.
Hi, could you change the words like the ones in #163 on this one? Also, could you please tilt the brain so that it does not fall our of the hand (marked)? Would you also make this entire design using navy blue background and negative space. I would like to see how that would look like. Thank you.
Would you please modify the brain on this one also so that the brain is less abstract? I think the wrist of the hand needs to be adjusted as well so that it does not curve this much. Thank you.
Hi, would you please refine the lines of the brain so that the brain portion looks less abstract? We would like to see what that may look like. Could you also show us a version without the person in it, and a version with the person being smaller and more subtle. Please change the font and size of the words, and see if you could have one of the letter in "Behavior" be replaced by a person instead. Thank you.
Hi, please move words to right side of logo, use same font for all the words but use a different font that's more artistic looking. If you may, play with the color scheme so it looks more vibrant. Thanks.
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for font and size #378 is the same as #321.
We like the hand with the outline better. Could you change the hand such that it has an open palm instead of finger pointing upward? Can you have the person rest on top of the palm instead of the thumb?
Would you please also go back to #257 and remove all the sharp edges and the gaps inside the brain, and leave the rest as is?
Thank you!
always open to all your revisions.
Would you please take out the white outline of the hand? We'd like to see how it looks without it. Please also made the word "care" slightly bigger as long as you think it compliments the entire design.
Would you also provide a version with serif font? Thank you very much.
feel free if you need revision/something else.
1 - significantly simplify the logo so the brain is very abstract
2 - show logo with various font type and font size combinations. Please also play with various spacing between letters.
3 - Show both this logo and logo with first change incorporated in all black with white background
4 - Show both this logo and logo with first change incorporated in a size fit for business card so I can see how it looks small.
5 - based on first change, also tilt the brain backwards so the front does not extend beyond the hand.
Thank you.
let me know if you need revisions/something else.
let me know if something is wrong.
please feel free if you need revision/something else.
Best Regards
Dalhaz
let me know if something is wrong/missing something.
Best Regards
Dalhaz