#11 and #10 = great job so far. Can you please try versions that encase the outside text -- maybe the outside is a red border and the fitness/firearms/fighting is in white font? and for same thing for #10 but a black border and white font.
In addition = the client would like to see a fist or knife or gun some how included. Whatever you think as I know your logo design is already maximized for content - but see if you can come up with something creative with the note encasing of the border too of course.
Thanks for the explanation, I could submit some new adjustment, but since your contest is already in judging mode, only the first rank designer still can submit revision. Please put me on the first rank so I can submit the revisions for you. You can always change the rank position anytime you want.