Hi,
I have posted the updates, #23#24#25 , the difference is that the hand holding the dumbbell,
- #24 is flexing closer to the chest/shoulder.
- #25 is wider, and the outline is a little bit thicker than the other entries.
- a little bit adjustment on the lower body.
let me know your thoughts.
Thank You for your feedback, I really enjoy working on your contest.
Thank you for the changes:). I don't think that having the objects in black silhouette is the right definition, you can't really make out most of the objects still. When the logo is small the only objects you can make out is the handbag and the dumbbell. The arms holding the phone and the dumbbell still seem short and out of proportion. The skirt can be a little shorter, somewhere between how you had it before and how it is now. Also is there any way we can define her lower body somehow? I would like to see her face, like the other one you sent me. Thank you again.
Thank you for the changes:). I don't think that having the objects in black silhouette is the right definition, you can't really make out most of the objects still. When the logo is small the only objects you can make out is the handbag and the dumbbell. The arms holding the phone and the dumbbell still seem short and out of proportion. The skirt can be a little shorter, somewhere between how you had it before and how it is now. Also is there any way we can define her lower body somehow? Thank you again.
I gave you feedback I really like the font, but I don't like the font on this design. I really like the font on your other design. Sorry for any confusion. Thank you.
Thank you for submitting your designs and for following my brief:). I like where this is going. Here's a few notes I have for you:
- It's Boss "Bitches" not "Bitch", please correct this.
- I really like the font.
- I don't like the poodle
- The skirt is a little too short so it looks hoochie. Please lengthen the skirt a little so it's still confident but professional.
- There needs to be some sort of definition because when the logo is small you really can't tell what she is holding in her hands. I really like the definition in her face.
- I would really like to see only the following symbols: mobile phone, take out cup of coffee (disposable cup, she is on the run and in a hurry), hand bag, baby's bottle, cash and a dumbbell.
- The arm holding the dumbbell should be flexing like she is working out her biceps,
- Instead of wearing a crown, I would love to see her hands making a heart above her head.
Looking forward to seeing the updated design! Thank you.
Thank you for submitting your designs and for following my brief:). I like where this is going. Here's a few notes I have for you:
- It's Boss "Bitches" not "Bitch", please correct this.
- I really like the font.
- I don't like the poodle
- The skirt is a little too short so it looks hoochie. Please lengthen the skirt a little so it's still confident but professional.
- There needs to be some sort of definition because when the logo is small you really can't tell what she is holding in her hands.
- I would really like to see only the following symbols: mobile phone, take out cup of coffee (disposable cup, she is on the run and in a hurry), hand bag, baby's bottle, cash and a dumbbell.
- The arm holding the dumbbell should be flexing like she is working out her biceps,
- Instead of wearing a crown, I would love to see her hands making a heart above her head.
Looking forward to seeing the updated design! Thank you.
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I have posted the updates, #23 #24 #25 , the difference is that the hand holding the dumbbell,
- #24 is flexing closer to the chest/shoulder.
- #25 is wider, and the outline is a little bit thicker than the other entries.
- a little bit adjustment on the lower body.
let me know your thoughts.
Thank You for your feedback, I really enjoy working on your contest.
S
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Thank you for the changes:). I don't think that having the objects in black silhouette is the right definition, you can't really make out most of the objects still. When the logo is small the only objects you can make out is the handbag and the dumbbell. The arms holding the phone and the dumbbell still seem short and out of proportion. The skirt can be a little shorter, somewhere between how you had it before and how it is now. Also is there any way we can define her lower body somehow? I would like to see her face, like the other one you sent me. Thank you again.
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Thank you for the changes:). I don't think that having the objects in black silhouette is the right definition, you can't really make out most of the objects still. When the logo is small the only objects you can make out is the handbag and the dumbbell. The arms holding the phone and the dumbbell still seem short and out of proportion. The skirt can be a little shorter, somewhere between how you had it before and how it is now. Also is there any way we can define her lower body somehow? Thank you again.
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Here is the update #20 #21
let me know your thoughts.
Thanks,
Best Regards,
S
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I'm sorry, I just woke up, I'm working on it now.
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Cheers!
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Thank you for submitting your designs and for following my brief:). I like where this is going. Here's a few notes I have for you:
- It's Boss "Bitches" not "Bitch", please correct this.
- I really like the font.
- I don't like the poodle
- The skirt is a little too short so it looks hoochie. Please lengthen the skirt a little so it's still confident but professional.
- There needs to be some sort of definition because when the logo is small you really can't tell what she is holding in her hands. I really like the definition in her face.
- I would really like to see only the following symbols: mobile phone, take out cup of coffee (disposable cup, she is on the run and in a hurry), hand bag, baby's bottle, cash and a dumbbell.
- The arm holding the dumbbell should be flexing like she is working out her biceps,
- Instead of wearing a crown, I would love to see her hands making a heart above her head.
Looking forward to seeing the updated design! Thank you.
Cheers!
Boss Bitch Winning at Life
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Thank you for submitting your designs and for following my brief:). I like where this is going. Here's a few notes I have for you:
- It's Boss "Bitches" not "Bitch", please correct this.
- I really like the font.
- I don't like the poodle
- The skirt is a little too short so it looks hoochie. Please lengthen the skirt a little so it's still confident but professional.
- There needs to be some sort of definition because when the logo is small you really can't tell what she is holding in her hands.
- I would really like to see only the following symbols: mobile phone, take out cup of coffee (disposable cup, she is on the run and in a hurry), hand bag, baby's bottle, cash and a dumbbell.
- The arm holding the dumbbell should be flexing like she is working out her biceps,
- Instead of wearing a crown, I would love to see her hands making a heart above her head.
Looking forward to seeing the updated design! Thank you.
Cheers!
Boss Bitch Winning at Life