BTW: Can you make me another version of the logo, with the tag line unbolded. I think the text looks cleaner/leaner unbolded. And maybe even make it 1/2 size font bigger. See how that looks pls. Thx.
Hi there. So - you are in 1st place now. Assuming you win, can you also create a 2nd version of the logo, that we can use that fits in a LinkedIn page and for Instagram, etc. We need a cool version that leverages your logo, but fits in a stamp/box size dimension. Maybe one that just uses the main name in a box using same fonts and colors, i.e.:
BOS-UP
.WORK
Do you have thoughts on that?? And I am happy to pay for this in addition. LMK. Thx.
- Make the the tag line and outside box line 2 shades darker grey
- Unbold the tag line
- Add a little more margin between the tag line and the Powered by Ninety line
- Please update the text at bottom to this:
BOS-UP® helps startups and small companies learn,
develop, implement and benefit from a custom-tailored
Business Operating System (BOS), powered by Ninety®.
Please make a version with this text underneath the logo. Use the blue color from logo for the text. Imagine this is going to be a billboard at an airport. To see how the text should be set - look at my original attachment, i.e. 3 lines in the main paragraph and one line for last sentence, all center justified.
BOS-UP® helps startups and small companies learn, develop, implement and benefit from a Virtual Workplace, using a Business Operating System (BOS), powered by Ninety®.
So Close! Remove a smidge of the spacing between BOS-UP and the tag line. Just a smidge. But keep the space between the tag line and the square the same.
I like it. Can you make the tag line grey slightly darker, so it is same color as the outside line. Also - I don't think the Powered by Ninety is actually centered. It needs to move to the right more some (see my markup). Pls check that.
Change the BOS-UP and .WORK to one solid blue color (remove the shine effect). And add the Registration mark (r) to the upper right of the k in work. Also - I think the line to the right of Ninety needs to be a tad longer (looks like the space between the left and right are not the same. And is the registration mark to the right of Ninety bold? If not - pls make it bold like the words.
Make .WORK 1/2 font bigger and unbold it (the . is also not even with the BOS-UP text, you can lower it some, so its on same plane). Remove the glare from the tag line (keep it same color and Ninety), just keep it one color and remove the comma before the word ,for. And make the outside line slimmer (1/2 the thickness) and same blue as BOS-UP. Make Powered by Ninety 1 font smaller.
i liked the box the way you had it before - with the top right corner. Ninety needs the registration (r) mark. i think you can make the words in box bigger so it fits closer to box lines. and try to make the BOS-Up look two dimensional. it needs more "pop! - its kinda boring.
1) add an S to the word SYSTEM 2) add .WORK underneath the P, 3) make the tag line slightly bigger/longer, 4) move the > to the upper right hand corner
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space too tight or not?
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i will do it if the contest has ended
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BOS-UP
.WORK
Do you have thoughts on that?? And I am happy to pay for this in addition. LMK. Thx.
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the layout, font thickness and color combination between dark blue and dark gray look great already representing strength and professionalism
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Any other ideas on how to make it look even better?
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actually it's one color, because the font size looks lighter
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And can you make the tag line 1/2 font size bigger
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- make Powered by Ninety the same color as BOS-UP
- unbold the Powered by text and make it 1 font size smaller
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- make Powered by Ninety the same color as BOS-UP
- unbold the Powered by text and make it 1 font size smaller
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- Make the the tag line and outside box line 2 shades darker grey
- Unbold the tag line
- Add a little more margin between the tag line and the Powered by Ninety line
- Please update the text at bottom to this:
BOS-UP® helps startups and small companies learn,
develop, implement and benefit from a custom-tailored
Business Operating System (BOS), powered by Ninety®.
Join our community today @ www.BOS-UP.work.
- And make the text font 2 times smaller
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BOS-UP® helps startups and small companies learn, develop, implement and benefit from a Virtual Workplace, using a Business Operating System (BOS), powered by Ninety®.
Join our community today @ www.bos-up.work.
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i will do it
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thank you for the comment
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Any comment to revision?
Thanks! :)