I love everything about this design but I'm not sure if I can make it work, seems like it needs to have more difinitive lines for a logo, It would be killer as a t-shirt!!
Hi, thank you for the feedback. Please see revised entry. It's nice to know, that you like my style. If you check LT portfolio or some of my winning entries you will see, that this style is not unusual for logo design. Here you can see only low resolution preview for now, but the original drawing is all vector and perfectly scalable for all kinds of prints. I am certain, that it will look good on the web as well. Revisions welcomed.
I also really like keeping the word campers straight instead of the more rounded one, however I really like the lady in the logo too, great work man just great!