Hi,
Thank you for paying attention to my work!
Unfortunately I received your feedback too late, right after the contest has closed, so now I can't upload any new versions only if I'm the 1st ranked designer!
If you feel that my concept is what you are looking for, please make this step for I can show you the modifications or pick up as a winner any of my entries and I will gladly work with you to finishing the details even after the contest!
Meanwhile, for more trust, please take a look at my portfolio to see my whole activity, at:
http://www.logodesignleader.com.au/Portofolio/Best regards,
Adrian Chambre