You are going to be a finalist. Here are the parts that need to be refined.
As it is the person that represents the Y in Body doesn't work. There's a readability issue. Also, Body by Nature needs to be in it's own row because as it is it reads as Nature Fitness. Fitness can be separated but Body by Nature cannot. The catch line should probably be one color.
Can the Y body be made blue like the rest of the letters and the head gray? Also make the "by" in smaller font. Is like to see a darker blue and darker gray. Capitalize the "B" for "Body". Thank you
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As it is the person that represents the Y in Body doesn't work. There's a readability issue. Also, Body by Nature needs to be in it's own row because as it is it reads as Nature Fitness. Fitness can be separated but Body by Nature cannot. The catch line should probably be one color.
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Thanks!
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Can you add the slogan "building Better Bodies, naturally " ?
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Here are my first options.
Please don't hesitate to leave a comments and advices.
Regards!